5.4.08

Keeping

Before the water runs dry
Before she closes her eyes
Before she turns her last corner
Before she walks the longest road

Come around and pick her up
She's not giving up
She simply wants to know how much longer
She can only do so much

These thoughts come in different flavors
And this is one that she doesn't know
Come with the last season
Bring a new beginning

17 comments:

O'Dee said...

Inspiration is coming ur way.

How body?

Ms. emmotions said...

hmmm, very uncomplicated and nice

The Activist said...

lovely

anonymous gal(retired blogger) said...

hmmm

Buttercup said...

nicely written!

Anonymous said...

simple complication...is there anything like that? Yeah your short word strikes that image...

love it!

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Flourishing Florida said...

i like this, & am not even one 4 poems

Ms. emmotions said...

nice read,

first time here

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Flourishing Florida said...

i don update oh!!!

u ma u need 2 do same sef. lol

Mz. Dee said...

luvd dis! felt lyk u were speakin to me.
think i'm gna learn dis by heart o

Shubby Doo said...

lovely & simple...it is never to late to start

Straight from the heart said...

Beautiful, beautiful! I had to go back and read quite a few post as it's my first time here, you put things so simply and beautifully.

Rayo said...

i love ur poetry, its simple, beautiful, simply beautiful

isha said...

Thanks people. I have neglected my Musings. I have to start writing again.

Chris Ogunlowo said...

Hmmm, lovely verse.

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